#214: The Before and After Winning Notre Dame Essay
Every fall a family comes to me and wants me to review a college essay their daughter or son drafted and give feedback before it’s submitted. 99% of the time, the essay is no bueno. By “No Bueno,” I mean, please do NOT turn this in.
The worst is what I call the kitchen sink essay. It’s got too many topics wrapped in one essay and it is way too confusing for the reader.
In today’s episode, Dina Petringa and I unpack the “before and after” of the winning Notre Dame essay, otherwise known as the “Sports Journalism” Essay. Dina has worked with me for over 5 years and we’ve read thousands of essays.
If you’ve ever wondered what the heck will my child write about? This episode is for you.
If your child is thinking about writing about sports, and you’ve heard me say, “Do NOT write about sports,” This episode is definitely for you.
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